Today I resubmit again my draft report for checking started from chapter 1 until chapter 4.

Comments:-

• Some figures there's no explanation. Each of the figure or diagrams included must be explain or clearly defined in texts.
• Some explanation are missing. Gantt charts needed for PSM 1 and 2.
  
• Chapter 5 - conclusion is included. Reminded that maximum pages for the proposal is 50 pages. Figures such as Gantt charts, class diagram, sequence diagrams, activity diagrams, interface designs and database designs can be placed under Appendix. So that, number of pages can be reduced.

Presentation slides:

• Introduction, problem backgrounds, objectives, scope, and project aims.
• Some of the literature reviews current existing portals, software and hardware needed.
• Methodology used.
  
• Designs - system architecture, use case, interface designs.
• Conclusion.