First submission of Chapter 1 & 2

On 23rd August, I already submitted my first draft report for Chapter 1 & 2. Then today, I went to see Miss Hazinah to get the results.

Comments on Chapter 1:-

1. My report wasn't in a correct format. Then I need to redo with a correct format.

2. Introduction

• must be clearly defined about what is online resource sharing portals.
  
• I used the word "portal" as I assumed it is the english word. But Miss said it is a malay word so can use it without italicize it.
• The word font must be in Times New Roman. Use the standard format.
  

3. Problem Background

• must go beyond the problem, means must go details on the problem so that easy to identify the main problem.
• must go beyond the problem of your own portal and not generally about the online resource sharing portal.

4. Objective

• need to do some corrections and must be clearly defined.

5. Scope

• shouldn't be in point form, must be in a paragraph.
  
• need to explain more about scope including the tools and techniques to be used.

6. Importance of Project

• shouldn't be in point form, must be in a paragraph and explain more clearly.

7. Organization of report

• Actually, I make a conclusion of the chapter1 in this part which is wrong.
• I need to summarized the chapter 1. Then some briefs about what am I going to do in the future chapters such as chapter 2, 3 & 4.

Comments on Chapter 2:-

1. No introduction for chapter 2. Please follow according to report format.
2. Rewrite needed.
3. Current existing portals studies :

• Every single figure must come together with explanation in text.
• Comparison table need to be more details about the features.
• Discussion about the comparison table

4. Need to study about the technology going to be used.
5. Brief more about the technologies studied.
6. Study about tools and techniques.